Archie stood beside Rocky, the tall, tattooed buzzed headed brute, who turned the Angel of Death into the galaxy winds. The ship sailed smoothly through a field of comets. Rocky maneuvered around the comets, keeping the crew safe, but also gave them quite the ride. The men laughed and cheered as Rocky zipped this way…
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Sirens of the Deep- Chapter 2
“David, bring me the map, would ye?” Archie said as he looked down at his map of Crescent Rim Galaxy. “Aye, Captain,” a low voiced short man with a bald head said and joined Archie at the digital map table, a small ball in his stubby fingered hand. “Here ye go, Cap’n.” Archie took the…
Sirens of the Deep- Chapter 1
Challenge from AutoCrit I decided to sign up to try my hand at a challenge before AutoCrit and had so much fun I signed up for another one. But this one is different as the people of AutoCrit gives you the first sentence, a twist, and then the last sentence that you have to incorporate…